This is a DLO called shoes narrative that me and my partner Nesi created. We each have to choose a buddy to work with and create our plan together. First we had to write a story together for 15 minutes, my partner Nesi write her first sentence, and I write mine next, and we keep on going until our 15 minutes finished. And this is the story that we wrote.
Your vivid description of events through the eyes of your shoes paints a very clear picture in my mind. I love the use of the word repugnant Well written girls.
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